I absolutely loved your pitch! All the information was presented in a clear and precise manner, and I thought that the use of visual aids and pointing out the lack of progress between business cards now and in the past was very smart as it immediately caught my attention. It was also smart to list the statistics and numbers behind your idea. Keep up the good work!
Scott, I thought your pitch was very attention-grabbing and highlighted the issue with current business cards very well. Your emphasis on how many are thrown out and forgotten also leads your viewer/listener to realize how much of an issue traditional cards are. My only recommendation is to promote the idea of your replacement a bit more. Overall, great work!
I absolutely loved your pitch! All the information was presented in a clear and precise manner, and I thought that the use of visual aids and pointing out the lack of progress between business cards now and in the past was very smart as it immediately caught my attention. It was also smart to list the statistics and numbers behind your idea. Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteI thought your pitch was very attention-grabbing and highlighted the issue with current business cards very well. Your emphasis on how many are thrown out and forgotten also leads your viewer/listener to realize how much of an issue traditional cards are. My only recommendation is to promote the idea of your replacement a bit more. Overall, great work!